Flyer:
To improve this I made the flames around the edges a lot brighter using the brightness/contrast tool to make the flyer stand out and catch the audience's attention a lot more than before. I also changed the font of the band names in the middle of the flyer to make them easier to understand for the person reading them. The dots in the middle of the page make sure that the information is separated so that it doesn't look to over crowded. I also added a little icon in between some of the band names to make it obvious of where the text starts and ends, otherwise it could get a little confusing.
To improve this i again changed the font in the middle of page for the bands playing as before it was quite hard to read/understand. The fact that I used bigger more bolder dots on this advertisement makes it look like there is more space and less information showing that the poster give you just the right information that you need. I also added the twitter and Facebook address as people will be sat down reading the magazine so will have the chance to follow/like the page which might draw their attention even more with other information on favorite bands or something. I also made the logo a lot sharper as on the original design it didn't look sharp and looked really bitty.
To improve the ticket i rearranged where the bands where on the ticket to draw the attention of the person with the ticket to the middle and so they know what ticket they have bought to go and see, to be aware of the main headlining acts of the stage you will be present at. I also changed the ticket around because on my original design i had the designs the wrong way around, so i switched the ticket around to make it make more sense and actually look like a ticket.I also brightened up the flames and sharpened the logo on the ticket as the flames were kinda dull and the logo was all bitty and pixelated.
